雅思犯罪类写作

雅思犯罪类写作（精选5篇）

雅思犯罪类写作 篇1

In some countries,a high proportion of criminal acts as committed by teenagers.Why has this happened?What can be done to deal with this?(犯罪2015.06.18)

Many people do not feel safe at home or they are out.What are the causes and what can be done to make people feel safe?(犯罪2015.06.27)

People are afraid to leave their homes for fear of crimes. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes while others think that little could be done. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.(犯罪2015.09.3)

高分范文题目：Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes of the phenomenon? How should they be punished?

写作提纲：

Reasons：

1 economic pressure, parents busy with work

2 small family

3 pressure from parents and from school as well

How to punish them：

1 deprive of freedom

2 work for local community

范文：

Youth crime contributes significantly to the increasing crime rate in the modern society. There is no doubt that these young delinquents take their punishment, but I prefer in different ways.

The reasons for this phenomenon are worth of scrutiny. In China with the economy booming, pressure from competition at work and business force parents to work hard, leaving insufficient time to their children. Without enough love from the family, these adolescents tend to do something astounding, sometimes slip beyond control. In addition, the one child policy in my country also contributes to higher crime rate because these little “emperors” are brought up in such a way that some of them are self-centered and tolerant of little. When confronted with difficulties or injustice, they are prone to resort to violence. Although spoiled, they have to live up to the high expectation of their parents in the name of love. Under such pressure from the family and school as well, they tend to be rebellious to their parents and teachers, in some cases the society as a whole.

When teenagers commit crimes, surely penalty should be given, especially the youth who commit serious crimes such as homicide or rape. No one should be excluded from justice, and justice has to be served. Depriving criminals of their freedom by imprisoning them, no matter how old they are, is the most effective measure to prevent crime and protect the lawful civilians in the society. Violent teenagers are as dangerous as their mature counterparts, hence should be put behind bars until they are no longer a threat to the public security.

On the other hand, most teenager crimes are minor, like vandalism, fighting or theft which does not do serious harm to victims. The immature behave in an illegal but less violent manner mostly for fun, or to show their courage to impress their peers or to attract their busy parents’ eyes. In these cases, they should be given some opportunities to be corrected and eventually come back to the right track rather than being judged as adults who commit crime deliberately with full awareness of the consequences of their conduct. Instead of being jailed, young lawbreakers can be forced to repair the damage to their neighborhood or local community, and offer their sincere apology to the victims or do some community duties such as serving the elderly in local nursing home.

To sum up, I personally reckon that political policy and the utilitarianism of educators should be responsible for today’s increasing juvenile delinquency. I agree with harsh treatment under the circumstances of serious crime. But if the offence is not major, adolescent criminals should be given alternative punishments like community service in order to reform them to be lawful citizens rather than being jailed.

雅思写作范文：恐惧犯罪

Task:Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crimes. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sample answer：

With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime, there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.

Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislation can effectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the mature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition, providing more education contributes to raise people’s safety awareness and consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails information about laws and legislation are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.

However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol are more accessible than before. People may have to commit crimes in order to get these items.

To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering educations are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.

(296 words)

雅思写作范文：青少年犯罪

Task：Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

It is sometimes argued that young lawbreakers should be tried as adults for crimes. I personally believe that this is partly reasonable.

On the one hand, those who participate in violent crimes should not be treated differently than adult offenders. This is because most crimes, such as rape or murder, are thoughtful, deliberate and cunning in its planning and execution. If our courts trend toward a more lenientposition, then the related laws and punishment will not have a deterring effect on teenagers. As a result, teenagers are likely to commit horrible crimes since they are aware that they have legal protection. What’s worse, these teens might recommit after they are released from jails. In some cases, the lighter sentencing might also lead to resentment towards the judicial system as victims might argue that these young offenders do not confess what they have done. This could also result in insecurity in our society eventually.

On the other hand, the circumstances of a crime and its motivation should be taken into consideration when it comes to juvenile delinquency. For example, because of distress and hunger, some teens may turn to stealing food or robbery during a period of famine. Under this circumstance, harsh punishment, such as long-term jail might not be the best solution. In my view, most of the young offenders lack parenting and self-discipline, which would mean that other alternatives, such as community service and rehabilitation might be better alternatives for them.

In conclusion, I feel that it is vitally important for judges and state legislators to ensure the justice equality regardless of the criminal’s age.

(268 words)

雅思写作范文：罪犯的教育意义

Task：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become law-abiding citizens. While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other measures are equally effective.

Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime. This is because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail and they may also experience some of them. At the same time, they can share the tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to the victims and their family members. This is more impressive than the traditional lectures given by professors. By listening to a wide range of real cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the future.

Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration as well. It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in some cases. By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile delinquency. Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people who know their children best in the world.

In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help the young generation to become good citizens.

(276 words)

雅思写作范文：青少年犯罪率提升

Task：In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

Sample answer：

In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has increased dramatically and this has caused a widespread discussion. Media violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below, followed by solutions.

The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency. Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting at home, interacting with their children more frequently and giving more attention and care especially emotional needs.

Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on screen.

In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the screen.

(267 words)

雅思写作范文：青少年罪犯是否该判刑

Task：Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

思路解析：

1. 应该，严肃的法律能起到一种威慑作用，让青少年们不敢再次犯罪。举例，今天我们对于青少年罪犯的法律惩罚实在是不痛不痒，甚至是太仁慈了，这让年轻人藐视法律，他们会想，即使犯罪也没什么大不。所以像成年人那样惩罚他们很必要，比如说关监狱，而不是简单地口头教导。这些痛苦的惩罚让年轻人不敢随便挑战社会法规。

2. 然而，年轻人的司法体系应该更加灵活一些，这是因为年轻人很年轻，不成熟，他们的犯罪动机很可能不是那么邪恶。举例，成年罪犯的抢劫动机很明确，就是通过袭击他人来获取财富。相比之下，青少年伤害他人的行为很可能只是因为来自同伴的压力，或是因为一时冲动。考虑到他们并不是有意要犯罪，所以给他们较轻的判罚是可以理解的。

参考范文：

Should young criminals be punished on the same level of adults, as some people argue? Personally, I agree with is assertion partially, while it underestimates the importance of a flexible judgment on youngsters.

The main reason of using the same standard to punish the youth is, it deters them from further crimes. Today, the main cause of juvenile crimes increasing is a lenient juvenile judicial system and milder punishments like lighter sentences, shortened prison terms, or even probation. Youngsters think they can always get off easily, regardless the seriousness of crimes. Therefore, it is necessary for juvenile offenders to be tried as strictly as adults, which lets these youngsters know that they are not exempt from heavy penalties, and not given any special consideration because of their age factor. By this way, their desires of making illegal activities would be inhibited.

However, to a large extent, juvenile judicial system should be flexible. Psychologically speaking, youngsters under the age of 18 are immature, with less social experience and concepts about social rules, or with no recognition about the consequence. In many cases, young criminals have no idea that what they do is illegal. For example, compared with adult criminals who have the definite plans and goals to make money by hunting or killing victims, the testimony of many teenage thieves and robbers proves that their movements are purposeless, and the main reasons for them to do so are no more than peer pressure and impulsiveness. Therefore, when it comes to the fact that adult criminals are intentional but young ones are unintentional, it is reasonable to treat and trial them differently.

In conclusion, a flexible juvenile judicial system should be encouraged. Although a strict punishment to young offenders as adults might be a profound education for young generations, sentences on young offenders should be lighter, considering the fact that their intentions of breaking law are fundamentally different from that of adults.

雅思犯罪类写作 篇2

之前笔者曾经接待过一名学员，英文能力很好，参加了雅思考试，出来的成绩为：听力8.5分，阅读9分，口语7.5分，但写作只有5.5分。该学员不服结果，申请复议写作成绩，复议后维持“原判”。为诊断该学员的问题，笔者让该学员在官方给定的考试时间（20分钟）内完成一篇小作文。笔者要求其写作的题目出自《剑桥雅思考试全真试题集7》Test 2（53页），该题目给出的图表如左下角所示。学员用了18分钟快速完成了以下这篇作文。

The diagram illustrates the general consumption of fish and meat in a European country during a 25-year period.

First of all， it can be concluded from the chart that beef was once the most popular meat choice for this country. In 1979， the average beef consumption per person per week was almost 220 grams. Then it started to fluctuate downward but with some exceptions. Around 1989， the leading position of beef was finally taken over by chicken， and by the end of 2004， the weekly consumption of beef was only around 100 grams， making it the second most popular meat choice.

In contrast to the dropping trend of other meats， chicken consumption told a totally different story. Although chicken started out at just 140 grams per week， the people in this country went on to enjoy it more and more. By 2004， chicken was unquestionably the No.1 meat choice for this country.

The trend of lamb consumption was very similar to that of beef. Beginning at 150 grams per person per week （and the second most popular meat at that time）， consumption kept on going down， and finally reached just above 50 grams in 2004， much less than that of beef and chicken.

Last but not least， in 1979， the weekly consumption of fish was already barely more than 50 grams. Then it slipped down slowly and moderately. In 2004， the weekly data pointed to less than 50 grams， still the least popular meat.

In conclusion， during the 25-year period， beef， lamb and fish consumption decreased， while chicken consumption went in the opposite direction. In 2004， chicken was the most popular meat choice， followed by beef， lamb and fish.

这篇作文几乎符合中国考生对于“优秀”图表写作的全部预期：涵盖了线图内的几乎所有信息点；分段清晰，段间的条理清楚；连接手段使用恰当；文章用词丰富、准确；语法结构严谨，错误少，且文章句子结构足够复杂。为什么写出这样文章的考生在实战中（也是遇到了一个折线图）仅获得了5.5分呢？

出现这样的落差的原因在于，多数考生判断一篇文章好坏时忽略了命题作文最核心的要求：写作不能跑题。很多考生在写作时简单停留在“把图表中的信息点梳理描述一遍”这个阶段，却未意识到一篇学术类报告的写作要求与机械的图表描述之间存在天壤之别。下面笔者来详细分析。

图表描述与学术报告间的区别

图表描述与学术报告间的区别到底是什么？一个简单的例子可以帮助考生理解两者之间的差别。

雅思写作青少年犯罪话题 篇3

思路解析：

青少年犯罪的根源1：媒体暴力的误导，让他们对于暴力产生崇拜，错误地认为通过犯罪来获取财富是合适的。

青少年犯罪的根源2：在经济萧条的大背景下，就业变得十分困难，很多年轻人被迫选择犯罪来谋生，或是报复社会。

解决之道：对于出版物进行审查和分类，这能把那些不良的信息过滤掉。还有就是免费的就业培训，这能让年轻人获取实际的技能，帮助他们在找工作中获得优势。

参考范文：

Nowadays, it has been reported that there has been an increasing number of crimes committed by youngsters in major cities all over the world. What causes this phenomenon and what people could do to resolve the problem have been widely discussed. In this essay, I would investigate the reasons and suggest some possible solutions accordingly.

There are two main reasons why this kind of crimes is on the increase. Firstly, violence on the internet, TV programs and video games is responsible for this situation. It is because youngsters, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, too much violence in the virtual world could render young people aggressive. As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to crimes. Secondly, low employment rate in many big cities around the world could be another major reason. Most countries are experiencing economic plateau or even backwards due to global economic crisis occurring a few years ago. Consequently, many businesses and factories have decided to cut off their staff or ten d to employ experienced workers over young graduates. This means some youngsters become jobless spontaneously once they graduate. Some of them even turn to commit crimes to make a living or get revenge on society.

In order to solve the problem, some main methods are advised accordingly. The first solution is to apply censorship and classification in issuing programs. This means governments or non-governmental organizations should censor the violent and prostitute contents of programs and label them such as “adult only” or “viewers excluded below 14” before programs are publicized. This would help to keep youngsters from too much violence on programs away. Another method is to carry out free job training programs designed closely related to the demand of the job market. After training, youngsters, more of ten than not, can expect better chances of being employed. Other ways could include tax-reduction policy for university graduates self-employment, providing paid social service positions for youngsters, etc.

To conclude, methods such as censorship on programs and free job training for youngsters are strongly recommended too much violence on programs and low employment.

雅思书信类写作赏析 篇4

An increasing number of people, particularly the young adults who have jobs, do not sense the need to know their neighbors. To begin with, most young people tend to be self-centered and do not trust people living near them. It is also possible that working people could not afford to spend time on gossiping about weather, dogs and new babies, in a similar way that traditional neighbors used to do. This absence of communication might turn out to be a dangerous thing, considering that having a friendly neighbor is important to report suspicious activities to the police who handle the crooks. One good solution for this problem is to encourage neighbors to participate in a Citizens Neighborhood Watch Program meant to make it more difficult for bandits to perpetuate a crime nearby. By so doing, people in the same community can know each other and keep intruders away.

越来越多的人，尤其是有工作的年轻人，没有意识到需要了解他们的邻居。首先，大多数年轻人倾向于以自我为中心，不信任住在他们附近的人。也有可能上班族不能像传统邻居那样花时间闲聊天气、狗和新生婴儿。考虑到有一个友好的邻居向处理这些恶棍的警察报告可疑活动很重要，这种缺乏沟通可能会变成一件危险的事情。解决这个问题的一个好办法是鼓励邻居们参加一个公民社区监视计划，这个计划旨在使土匪在附近继续犯罪更加困难。通过这样做，同一个社区的人们可以互相了解并阻止入侵者。

On the other hand, interactive face-to-face contact among neighbors has become rare because of modern housing plans. In big cities, for instance, it seems that families are either “caged” like animals in department units of tall buildings, or are separated by walls usually two meters high. In both cases, neighbors appear to be at once so near, and yet so far away. As a result, the level of personal communication among neighbors is declining. This situation may also have something to do with the current crime wave reportedly up and rising. To cope with this situation, the least neighbors need to do is to know people next door and watch each other's back.

另一方面，由于现代住房计划，邻里之间的面对面的接触变得稀少。例如，在大城市，家庭似乎要么像动物一样被关在高楼的部门里，要么被两米高的墙隔开。在这两种情况下，邻居似乎都是如此接近，但却如此遥远。因此，邻居之间的个人沟通水平正在下降。这种情况也可能与当前的犯罪浪潮有关。面对这种情况，邻居们最需要做的就是认识隔壁的人，看对方的背。

It would not be necessary for people to move away from where they live so as to avoid crimes from happening in the neighborhood. However, it is imperative that they should have a sense of community by caring for their neighbors. Now that geography makes people neighbors for a reason, people should love their neighbors, but the question remains: do they know their neighbors next door?

G类雅思书信写作 篇5

You wish to immigrate to a country but are not sure about the requirements and applicationprocedure. Write a letter to the immigration officer of this country to ask about, say who you are and explain your qualificationsand experience.

范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to receive information regarding the immigration proceduresto Canada.

亲爱的先生、女士：

I am 34 years old and am currently working as senior mechanical engineer at ABC Tech Company in Shanghai. I hold a Bachelors and a Masters degree from Shanghai Tongji University. I am married and my wife will be having our first child this coming autumn.

我今年34岁，目前是上海ABC技术公司的.高级机械工程师，获上海同济大学学士学位和硕士学位，已婚，太太将于秋季生育我们的第一个孩子。

I have been considering immigrating to Canada for quiet some time and would like to know if my qualifications and work experience make me eligible to apply. I have enclosed my resume as well as a bank statement of my current financial status and my English proficiencylevel.